Holding Back
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From the moment Zeke and Uriah Pedrad came home with him, she hated him. There wasn't a problem because he hated her too. Everyone was used to their fighting and bickering so it almost didn't matter.
Tris Prior and Tobias Eaton. Always have and always will be enemies. Or so they thought...
Maybe this whole time they've just been holding back.
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