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The Promise [COMPLETED]
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Last published Sat, May 2, 2015
So this story was an experiment that I did with free verse poems. I was reading this book in my English class that had an abrupt ending, so I was wondering if I could make an ending to it, here is the product. This isn't perfect, but I tried to make it as good as I could. I hope you enjoy this small side project I did.
-Busshy
*Thanks to my English teacher for cheering me on to write this poetic book.
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Two hearts, one love. Will it last, or shatter into shards of glass?
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