I originally wrote this as part of my creative writing A-level, however I am now debating turning this into a proper story, a novel maybe? Anyway, I'd like to get some feedback on what I've got so far so please, comment if you feel like I could improve on anything or if any parts don't make sense. *Synopsis is still a work in progress but here's what I've got so far! (subject to change)* This is a world similar to the one you know, but it has a difference. When children reach the age of 12 they awaken to magical powers. Most only have one or two, but there are a lucky (or possibly unlucky) few who develop more than that, and are targeted by the government for devilish purposes.All Rights Reserved
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