Completely and Utterly Broken
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(WARNING: When I started this book I was like 13 so sorry for it's probably cringingness and grammar mistakes and everything else. -And I am not fixing it, because I just want to move on to new books. But whoever reads please enjoy.)
Zoe Lane
She's alone. She has no friends. Or parents, they died when she was fourteen. But even then she didn't have anyone close. No one cares about her. So she does the same thing every day.
She's broken.
School-
Only focuses on her school work. She sits alone at lunch. Doesn't have friends to talk to. And during the passing periods to her next classes. She tries to avoid the bulling. But she still goes home to new burises everyday.
Home-
She doesn't have an parents. Or brother or sisters to take care of her. And she's not even close to being rich to hire a maid to help. She has an alcoholic uncle who uses her for his own pleasure. And when she doesn't listen, he beats her. Which is often, and it doesn't help when she already has people beating her everyday.
How does she deal with it?
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