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Last published Sat, Oct 23, 2021
|| CURRENTLY OPEN || You submit your OC(s) and I give constructive feedback. I'm no expert but I've been reading fanfics,web novels/series, etc for quite awhile, so I can hopefully give some good CONSTRUCTIVE feedback (no I will not just be bashing your OC) as a web reader. From the MarySues to Bland Barrys, how can your OC be improved? Or do you have the worlds most bestest perfect OC that has transcended my simple smooth brain's comprehension, honestly who knows. Also feel free to just sit back and read for tips or well amusement.......? "Original fandom" OCs are encouraged (I don't really like that term, but basically I favor people who make their own worlds/plot).
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