How Albedo shat on Jeans approval

Uh yea pls gimme feedback, cuz I will have to proofread this some times. I literally wrote this in one night. And the sleep deprived mf I am I wasn't able to wait and upload it at daytime. So if there are any spelling mistakes whatsoever tell me please.

Now to the context:
This is a story inspired by a post from Tik Tok ( the username of the creator is @/ xiayanmm ) and a comment posted by @/ whorubro.wh
It's basically a story where Diluc Albedo and in the end Razor try to revive Kaeya.

Also English isn't my first language I'm from Germany, so please bear with my lack of writing skills.
Now have fun reading :D

(Cover picture is also drawn by the artist @/ xiayanmm on Tik Tok, so please go visit her account, their art style is incredible!)