Story cover for Sun Goes Down by LairaM3
Sun Goes Down
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Ongoing, First published Dec 22, 2014
My fingers gliding against the pebble
felt cool. I threw it; hard as it skipped
on the water.


"Beginner's luck." He smirked as he
failed to skip a stone.


I watched his sink to the gravel - like,
bottom of the lake, startling the fish
as the ripples grew wider.


The cat tails on the left side of the pond
swayed left to the breeze. The sun was
setting soon so I skipped my last stone.
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'Take me to the Lakes, where all the poets went to die....' That's what Taylor said.' "This would be a pretty spot to die" I whispered to myself while trying to skip a little rock across the crystal pond