I don't know yet...
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  • Parts 11
  • Time 53m
  • Reads 168
  • Votes 7
  • Parts 11
  • Time 53m
Ongoing, First published Dec 23, 2014
Okay so I have no idea what to call this yet... 
Please give this story a chance.
 As you read it please comment any constructive criticism that you think could make it better or make more sense.
And PLEASE NO HATING IN THE COMMENTS!!!!!! This is the first story I'm  publishing on here, and I don't really want to know how stupid my idea(s) is or anything like that.
Just please remember that this is my first one (at least in this genre-ish thingy) I'm writing it with my phone, and I'm not even that sure about it yet.
Also I really would appreciate it if you would comment on anything if the way I wrote it doesn't make sense or how I could make it better. 
I REALLY, REALLY hope you like it!! And thanks for trying it out!!!!!
:)   ;)
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