The Castle Of The Realm
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You better know a story before you read it but if you're not welling to risk spending your time on some philosophical fantasy I wrote, you better don't get into something you can't get out from.
I don't have a lot to explain about what I wrote because it's not gonna help you, you just need to figure out the main idea by yourself and it will be a challenge for you to do while reading my story because literally it's a total mess.
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