THE BRIDE

This story is a short story which will excite with suspense element in it, All about a women having lots of dare and presence of mind to handle any situation. And this story inspired the women. Shown a women empowerment in this story.

please review my story as i am new in this and have course to learn more about writing, please also tell me, my mistakes after reading it and kindly help me with solution of that mistakes.
Thank you..