Inferno

This is gonna be my first story I ever post; It's actually just what I made along with help from my friends just to hand in as my work of my school's "Short Story Competition", and I got in the Top 5 ;)
Unfortunately there was a word limit, so I shortened as much as possible, and this was the result;
Hope you enjoy! c:
[also i will post the finished version as one whole story when i completed the parts where i marked with an asterisk]

This is a story about a boy, he was fated to journey in a different part of the world where not anyone should know; the Inferno. After a long time, he managed to escape, but leaving the rest of his family behind.
In exchange, he obtained powers which no one had, and it was the only thing left that reminds him - Inferno wasn't a dream; it was reality, and a nightmare.

- Keb