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Complete, First published Nov 13, 2021
Running through this dark passage, I can feel it behind me. Five steps behind or probably fifteen steps behind me. I don't know. I don't want to turn my head. I can feel it. Run. Run. Panting, all I wanted is getting out of here. I can't see anything. It's completely dark.

It's only a little GCSE creative writing I did and I wanted to show it to you ! I hope you'll like it.
(Write a short story that begins with the sentence: "Suddenly, I heard it. It was coming from the other side of the passage.")
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