Valley Among The Mountains
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MatureComplete Sun, Nov 14, 2021<5 mins
A poem I wrote inspired by a song I had listened to that had some impact on me. The story mimics most of what was said lyrically in the song. I wanted to put a narrative spin on it to see how it would sound flushed out with some more details in the world. While still remaining true to the lyrics within the song
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