Wanting him

Haiiiiii you guissss this is my first fanfiction, so I want you to tell me how good I did after each part. Please read and tell me what you think. It's about 3 girls, Kaytlin is the main with her best friends waverley, and Averi. They are seniors in high school and kaytlins best friends are dating luke and mikey which are freshmons in college.
Averi with mikey and waverley with Luke.
Kaytlin has been having the biggest crush on ashton...a sophomore in college and finally gets the guts to say something to him...