ITV Rants....
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Hi guys...
Closed at for some days
My Rants on serials that run on National television... characters and sloppier plots...
(Ghkkpm, Krpkab, Anupama,Yrkkh) and much more
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I like to watch good stories...good plots...good action sequences... and good romantic track...even main roles in a powerful negative roles are a treat to watch...
Kuch rang pyaar ke aise bhi is one such classic..
oh..c'mon...no show showed a female lead dancing her heart out..when dev confessed his feelings...rather than her sitting hours on a dressing table and imagining an half hour dream sequence...it was more close to reality than others were...
And then they are serials...ufff...where do I start???
These are purely my opinion and I do not intend to hurt or create hate...
I have nothing against the actors...it is just the character that they portray and storyline I am talking about...so don't get offended...
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