The Blizzard (Tintin fanfiction) Story 1

The wind was rapidly blowing and the light snow fall became a blizzard outside Marlinspike Hall. Everyone had fallen asleep, suddenly a soft tapping was heard the front door.
Hello!
This is my very first story I'm putting on Wattpad. I hope whoever reads it enjoys it. :)
Please tell me what you think about this story so far, I would really appreciate it! :)