Melkor's Mistake
Hetalian_Hobbit
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  • Reads 6,136
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  • Parts 10
  • Time 1h 48m
Hetalian_Hobbit
Ongoing, First published Dec 27, 2014
Mature
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Luinil has a dark secret. She's tried to keep it from everyone, since the moment the Eagles set her in in the path of Feanor, but after years and years of hiding, it has finally been discovered: she is part Vala, the daughter of Melkor. Though Melkor made a vow to kill her, he hasn't acted upon it yet, despite the fact he could have. She's worried for herself, but she's also worried for her best friend. While most of her is evil inside because of her father, a small part of her mother, a Sindarin Elf, shines brightly through the darkness, so Luinil chooses to only act on that. But Feanor, sinking further and further into darkness and lust for the Silmarils, becomes less friendly to Luinil every day. She tries not to let it influence her, but...Feanor may bring out her dark side, and then she will have no choice but to join her father.
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Bride of Mordor

12 parts Ongoing Mature

☀️ 3rd Place for the Writer's Glory Awards, Horror genre! Aradheleth, daughter of the Witch King of Angmar, was born into darkness and servitude and promised to the one Dark Lord of Arda. What awaits her in Mordor? Will her blackened heart be enough to sate Sauron? Will she bend to his every whim, or will the static memories she is plagued with, contort her from the path she is meant to lead? NOT YET EDITED PROPERLY. ON TEMPORARY HIATUS ⛔️ WARNING: This story contains explicit sexual content (erotica), dark and evil themes, gore, violence and possible rape. MDNI - MINORS DO NOT INTERACT! ⛔️

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