Melkor's Mistake
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Last published Tue, May 5, 2015
Luinil has a dark secret. She's tried to keep it from everyone, since the moment the Eagles set her in in the path of Feanor, but after years and years of hiding, it has finally been discovered: she is part Vala, the daughter of Melkor. Though Melkor made a vow to kill her, he hasn't acted upon it yet, despite the fact he could have. She's worried for herself, but she's also worried for her best friend. While most of her is evil inside because of her father, a small part of her mother, a Sindarin Elf, shines brightly through the darkness, so Luinil chooses to only act on that. But Feanor, sinking further and further into darkness and lust for the Silmarils, becomes less friendly to Luinil every day. She tries not to let it influence her, but...Feanor may bring out her dark side, and then she will have no choice but to join her father.
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