Allegiant Rewritten
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Last published Fri, Jan 2, 2015
(This is my alternate ending to Allegiant- All rights go to Veronica Roth)
Tris has just managed to set off the memory serum, but was shot by David in the process. But what would happen if Tobias was there to witness Tris being shot? What if he was able to bring Tris to the hospital in the bureau and just about save her life? What if Tris and Tobias were able to live a long and happy life in a newly reformed city of Chicago? This is my rewrite of Allegiant because the ending of it destroyed me. P.S. do not read this if you haven't read Allegiant.
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