The unexpected murder-er.
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Last published Sun, Dec 12, 2021
Death. Of her dad. Detective Conwin thinks he was murdered but the family members say it was suicide.
As the story continues you will have a lot of suspects but who knew it's gonna be......
The plot twist is epic. It's unexpectedly Amazing. You won't be able to decide whether to punish or let the culprit go.
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I'll keep the chapters short and the whole book as well. Cause I know teenagers nowadays love short simple things. And also, I don't want to take much of your time.
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*may contain some abusive scenes but that's the reality right? so why to hide it?*
hope you give some of your precious time to this book. And click on the star button at the end of every chapter to send sparkles ✨ in my notification bar and a smile on my face<3
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