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B E T Chapter 1

B E T Chapter 1

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WpMetadataNoticeLast published Fri, Dec 3, 2021
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BET Chapter 1📖 _In everything that you do wrong, You must pay the price. The bible says the same thing. If you're an adulterer, Fornicator, Hypocrite etc, You'll obviously go to hell_ _There shouldn't be spoilers in this story, Will just go to the present time of what's happening and will happen, But not giving a reason why this happen_ '''Presently, There was a girl called Carmen Rodriguez. She lived with her parents in San Francisco. Carmen always wanted to visit her grandma in the village "Saint Louis". Carmen goes to the village for the Christmas holiday. One night she goes in a bush to pee. Then finds her self surrounded by tornadoes. She sees a portal goes into another dimension. She goes to another dimension seeing horrifying creatures. She finds a demon in human form called "NATO", Tells that she wants to go back home, But Nato tells her there's no way back home, She's here and here forever. She weeps and she keeps telling the demon that she wants to go back. So Nato suggested that if she really wants to go back home, She should follow a ritual called "The Akan Ritual" She ask what is she to do to follow the Akan Ritual. Nato tells Carmen that she has to sacrificing her tongue by cutting it completely. She agreed, Then they proceeded. Carmen is put in a giant pot, Nato cuts her tongue then close the pot. [Incantation] Then she felt asleep and dizzy. Carmen wakes up in morning back home without no tongue. The parents saw she had no tongue. Carmen and her parents left the village without telling anyone. They took a cab. While they were going, They reached San Francisco but they didn't see Carmen again.''' WHERE IS CARMEN...!? To Be Continued... (Watch Out For Chapter 2)📖
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