Miracle Mirage (Draft One)

Warning: this is a first draft. it is meant mostly to outline the story and work on revisions later. Critique would be appreciated greatly. This project will likely take a few years to complete, even if this form of it is finished, as it will go through many drafts and revisions. In short: This version might be garbage, as a lot of first drafts tend to be.
Max gets attacked by a monster while taking a walk. She is saved by a girl named Ray, the captain of the royal guard from the kingdom of Serene Isles. Ray tells her of the Sanctuary Circus, a mysterious traveling circus that is cursing the people of Serene Isles. Max and Ray both find that they were blessed with magical powers that allow them to transform into powerful beings that can fight against the Sanctuary Circus and turn the monsters back to their former selves.

*its got pictures in it

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Keep in mind: I have not written much in a while so my abilities may be sucky

Takes inspiration from: Revolutionary Girl Utena, Madoka Magica, Rose of Versailles, Smile Precure, Princess Tutu

CW: gore descriptions, large age gap relationship (between 2 adult characters, but it is an unhealthy relationship and portrayed as such), suicide attempt (later on), suggestive themes/implications, SA attempt, child abuse implications, implied sexual abuse towards adult character(s)