Blackthorne, Sweetbrier
- Reads 10
- Votes 0
- Parts 2
Ongoing20m
Last published Tue, Aug 16, 2022
This is a place for me to show some of the parts of my story that I've written and would like to get feedback on. This is not a full story just yet. Everything will be published in order of it happening within the story, so parts will be moved around.
~~~~~~
Blackthorne, Sweetbrier is the story of Charlotte Barlowe, a young girl running against time as she uncovers the tainted history of her family. She discovers her dark freckle beneath her left eye is a common attribute in the deceased children in her bloodline, all of which died a gruesome death. In her fight to keep herself alive, she meets the creature designed to keep her dead. The final trail will commence on the Harvest Moon in the year she turns 18, the ending deciding whether she lives to see tomorrow's sunrise or if she becomes another child, hidden beneath the lies of the Barlowe family.
~~~~~~
TRIGGER / CONTENT WARNINGS:
- severe mommy issues
- mentions of poor mental health and evidence of past harmful behaviors
- dead people (both undead and just regular dead)
- minor blood / gore
All Rights Reserved
#7
neurodiverse
Join the largest storytelling communityGet personalized story recommendations, save your favourites to your library, and comment and vote to grow your community.
You may also like
The Grey's Curse
What would you do if there was a Monster that one day popped up in your life? uninvited and seemed to know exactly where you were at all times? What if it almost ended your life? Would you tell someone and risk being told that you're crazy? Maria asks herself the same questions and she can't help but to wonder, why does it hunt her so? Can she figure out a way to make it disappear? And most importantly Will she survive? _____________________________________________ In this gruesome horror story the events take place in modern day West Virginia which is where you will meet Maria Nichole Grey: a young and lonely fifteen year old girl that is still grieving the death of her father who died in a car accident seven years ago, leaving her with her aloof mother who was almost never home to witness the strange and dangerous happenings that keep Maria in constant danger. Maria wasn't sure why or how the entity haunted her; she never played with a ouija bound and she never chanted Bloody Mary in her bathroom but on this particular day, when she was home alone, a huge terrifying Monster pounced on her from her closet and attacked her in her own room, the Monster itself was a huge, horrifying, sinister entity with startling glowing yellow eyes that seemed to stare into her soul. The Monster seems to only be interested in Maria and targets her specifically, She has no clue as to why it's haunting her, no, hunting her, but she's determined to find out and put a stop to it before it can send the grim reaper her way. (Mature for gore & violence) (Word count around 60,000) (Also this was one of my first stories that I've written, I hope you like it! ♥︎) (Also this is in serious need of a rewrite which I hope to do later in the future ♥︎)Complete
Red Moon Princess
In a world where every royalty child is born with magical powers, depending on its kingdom, unexpected thing occur as a powerless princess is born in the ruling dynasty. The Sirius Bloodline of the moonlands or as one would like to call it 'Lunalurse'. Time passes and Maria soon turns seven and still doesn't awaken her gift. The King and his Queen find it odd as a royalty child mostly awakens their gift between the ages of 4 and 6. So they strive to seek answers, some deep inside the lunar palace, and some across the realms making long-life friends throughout the way. Would the powerless princess awaken her gift? And if she does what would it mean for her, the realms and everyone else? And what if her long-awaited gift is something no one has seen coming, not even her? And what if this power of hers releases unknown and unwanted guests some the world would have been a better place without and what if she's all to blame? And what if whilst performing her duty of protecting the realms, she becomes aware of the feelings her best friend Ashton harbors for her, knowing her cousin has taken a liking to him for years? Rowan realizes he has fallen in love with her cousin, as well as Zephyr who has fallen for Maria. She finds herself in a turmoil of longing and raw emotions where she has to choose between love or performing her duty. Read it all as it takes place right before your eyes. It's never too late to hop onto the track of fantasies "I might be the princess of the moon, but I can also be the bringer of your doom." ----- All the characters, kingdoms, names, and places are my ideas. Any resemblance to real ones is purely coincidental. The story contains some violence and some explicit scenes of gore, but nothing too bloody or disgusting. Keep in mind, that this is the first book I've ever written, and English isn't my first language. Any mistakes or twists of words are unintentional. I'd do better than this in the future so 🐻 with me.Complete
The Hidden Truth (Book 1)
It felt like it was just yesterday I was simply a princess, living under the guidance of my parents. I remember the days when I was an innocent girl, wanting to rule over my people independently. The girl who spoke gracefully, but had the tongue of a snake when felt threatened. The princess who was ready for a battle and could wheel any weapon handed to her, and could take down her enemies within seconds. But now since my time on earth, I was no longer the simple princess, with a hot temper. Somehow me coming to earth had changed my life, entirely. I discovered the truth about my past, about me and my kingdom, that I didn't know exist. Changing my entire life and forcing me to grow into the Queen I was meant to become. This is my story, the version all Helixian history book failed to tell, about THE HIDDEN TRUTH. *************************** During my time on wattpad I have read numerous books but they were mostly of Caucasian decent and I could barely find a book about a black woman who was strong and could defeat all odds, but instead are used as sex objects, in my book there will be an inclusion of every race whether it be mixed or not just so everyone feels included. Please Like Comment Share I would really appreciate it thank you...
Felon Identity - 1 (Available On Goodnovel)
In the dark night there is a girl who is running or we can say taking fast steps on the lonely road while tears are flowing down from her eyes . when she felt a strong kick on her stomach she stopped and started to cares her big Bloated stomach with her both hands in love showing way and a beautiful smile came on her face again. she cleaned her face with her both hands and again started to take step forward towards her destination. where she is going ? why she is in this condition ? why she is crying ? etc ..etc ... questions are running in your brain .. if you want the answers of your all the questions than join this story . warning :- this story for only those who are +18 and who love dark romance . 🔞mature content 🔞abusive language.Complete
Wild Hearted
This story begins in the country of Britannia. A country where several certain races live with one another. And at the center of these races stood a girl. A beautiful girl with wild molten hair and eyes that reflected the universe. She was the creation of love and the child of wilderness. She was someone full of wisdom, wisdom she had gathered from centuries of experience. Many don't know how she was born, some saying that she was the daughter of the blazing sun while others say that she was born from ashes during an alluring eclipse. The name they called her? Malaika Kya. Angel from the diamond sky. For eons she wandered, visiting many kingdoms and gaining many friends. She battled battles that many would have died from, protecting those she holds dear. Slowly, her family began to grow. Person by person, home by home, kingdom by kingdom. Her heart spreading the biggest of wings. But then it happened. The one she loved most was attacked, almost dying because of someone's idiocy. And so she fought. She fought for her dying family, soon gaining the powers of the internal flame buried deep inside her. Screeching her painful cry, she fought in her new form with all her might. But it wasn't enough as it's hand sprouted from her body. Tears fell from the eyes of her lover, his eyes wide as he watched her body wither in pain. Hey dark eye were gentle a she watched his physical pain disappear, his wounds sealed shut as he snatched her closer one more time. Softly she apologized, saying words she wanted so badly to say before sealing their goodbye with a kiss. After one last smile, she disappeared into the fire below, her body dissipating into the molten flames as her words echoed into the soundless wind. "Mind telling me about that promise again?"Complete
Gang life (Book 1)
Completed ✅ *BOOK 1 in the Gang Life series. * "You are mine! Do you understand?" He says. His soft lips are right up against my ear, his hands either side of my head and my back is up against the cold wall behind me. I roll my eyes at him, looking away. He slams his hand into the wall, making me jump and the white paint crack and chip. "Did you just roll your eyes at me?" He asks, voice dangerously low. "Don't do that... unless you want to see how I handle it" He groans, his dangerous dark brown eyes bore into mine. *** When young African-American girl Adeline Carter is faced with possibly one of the most interesting business deals of her life, how will she handle it? Will she rise above the challenge? Or will she crumble to his charms first?Complete
their lost girl
14 years ago two year old Violet King was kidnapped from her family sending them spiralling as they search the world for her. Present day Violet "Sinclair" is the daughter of two drug addicts. She is abused everyday by the people who should "love" and "protect" her. She is utterly clueless to the family that has spent years searching for her.Instead she accepts that she will forever be alone and unloved.. Forced to work when she isn't in school to supply her parents addiction all the while trying to not succumb to her injuries caused by them.She is struggling to survive until one fateful day; an accident occurs which means Violet is orphaned until she comes to learn not only were her "parents" not her parents but she has 5 brothers whom have never given up searching for her. Violet is determined to hide the dark secrets of her past and the deep scars/bruises it left behind but what happens when they start to see past her mask? and what happens when she realises she isn't the only one with secrets... Can she survive in such a dangerous world? or will the traces of her past come back to haunt her? #1 in Twins #5 in Secrets #1 in onlysister #2 in bigbrothers #1 in bruises #1 in scars #5 in love TW:,SA,SH, ABUSE TOPICS, VIOLENCE NOT MY PHOTOS
I Gave Him Fentanyl - 🔞A Dark Romance Thriller
When a STALKER kidnaps a SERIAL KILLER... °•°•°~-~-~°•°•°~-~-~°•°•° A woman obsessed with a brutal serial killer captures him in her basement, but as their battle of wits turns intimate, she must decide if she's his captor, his lover-or his next victim. °•°•°~-~-~°•°•°~-~-~°•°•° ''It's dangerous. He's dangerous. That sick fuck might be a cannibal with a blood kink for all I know. He might literally eat my pussy, until it's ripped out between my thighs. I don't want that to be the main cause of my death. Though the thrill of it all... whether he would bite me off completely or be merciful...was like playing Russian roulette....and it was making me tear up, but not in the eyes, but between my thighs. At that moment, I felt myself getting wet. I was confused actually, because I was totally and honestly afraid, but it got me SO...wet. That's when I realized I had been moaning loudly, and the panties stuck in my throat did nothing to volume it down.'' °•°•°~-~-~°•°•°~-~-~°•°•° 🎀TRIGGER WARNINGS🎀 CNC CBT Dubcon Gore Murder Beheading Gutting Stabbing Biting Physical, mental torture Suffocation Castration Masochism Sadism Cannibalism Hybristophilia Paraphilia Stockholm Syndrome Blood fetish Rough play Impact play Choke play Blade play Bondage Pegging Cuffing Stalking Kidnapping Human trafficking Drugs/Drugging.Complete
What would you do if there was a Monster that one day popped up in your life? uninvited and seemed to know exactly where you were at all times? What if it almost ended your life? Would you tell someone and risk being told that you're crazy? Maria asks herself the same questions and she can't help but to wonder, why does it hunt her so? Can she figure out a way to make it disappear? And most importantly Will she survive? _____________________________________________ In this gruesome horror story the events take place in modern day West Virginia which is where you will meet Maria Nichole Grey: a young and lonely fifteen year old girl that is still grieving the death of her father who died in a car accident seven years ago, leaving her with her aloof mother who was almost never home to witness the strange and dangerous happenings that keep Maria in constant danger. Maria wasn't sure why or how the entity haunted her; she never played with a ouija bound and she never chanted Bloody Mary in her bathroom but on this particular day, when she was home alone, a huge terrifying Monster pounced on her from her closet and attacked her in her own room, the Monster itself was a huge, horrifying, sinister entity with startling glowing yellow eyes that seemed to stare into her soul. The Monster seems to only be interested in Maria and targets her specifically, She has no clue as to why it's haunting her, no, hunting her, but she's determined to find out and put a stop to it before it can send the grim reaper her way. (Mature for gore & violence) (Word count around 60,000) (Also this was one of my first stories that I've written, I hope you like it! ♥︎) (Also this is in serious need of a rewrite which I hope to do later in the future ♥︎)
More detailsContent Guidelines