Tipping Mind
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Complete Fri, Feb 27, 20262h 3m
Did you ever experience those days where you go around with a bad feeling- a paranoia? Yet for an unknown reason you keep moving through the day, holding the big lump in your throat back, not letting the scream building deep in your chest out.
You just move forward like everyone expects you to. Even though you are never going to catch up to them.
If there was something, which descripes the total opposite of the experience before, it would be the occurrence of a happy ignorance, a blissful unawareness, a blind felicity...
So how does someone who felt exactly that kind of rapture comes to know the other side of the spectrum until there is nothing more than hollowness?
breakthrough ( noun )
/ˈbreɪkθruː/
a sudden, dramatic, and important discovery or development.
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