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Planet Redemption

Planet Redemption

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Mia in her final year of high school, turning 18 in a couple of months, her life is finally coming together. It all changes when she's at home watching her favorite show "Scandal" and the screen fuzzed up and glitchy picture went on the screen of the President of the United States. "Sorry to interrupt your program. We have got an alert from NASA there is an solar storm which will cause the whole world to have an earthquake. We don't not know how big this will be but were guessing the magnitude will be around 6.7," he looks around the dead silence room gulps and finally says "Please take cover and may god be with you all." Mia takes cover with her dog, Bamboo and her dad, Paul. When the earthquake comes it was 10x worse than what they said. In the basement dodging concrete chunks and debris coming from every which way. While running an concrete block hits her in unconsciousness. She hears voices and finally wakes up in a castle with a really hot looking villager and a medieval looking woman, but her eyes were all black. No white. No color of the eye. Just two black holes. She runs to a corner shielding herself. The woman approaches and says "I have helped you. You are #121314 remember that okay?" Mia hesitantly nodded her head. "You need to help your family out okay?" Mia looked confused. "Okay, Mia you're royalty down here. After your Mother died, it went to a sweet dark, to pure evil." The woman bowed and said " Queen Mia, I am Amanda. " Mia stood up and said "What do you mean down here?" Amanda paced thinking. "Tell me!" Mia yelled which echoed in the dark room. Amanda looked up and sighed. She walked closer with the clicks of her heels. "It wasn't no earthquake," She was hesitate and said in a low and quiet voice. " It was the enemy's army on their way to war."
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