Magoic Age-Black City
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Ongoing1h 5m
Last published Fri, May 22, 2015
Hope everybody enjoyed the original version of magoic age, black city. Because it will soon undergo renovations to bring everything put in it up to equal standards. Hope everybody remembers what it was like before it was changed.
-Prologue: Done
-Chapter 1:
-Chapter 2:
-Chapter 3:
-Chapter 4:
-Chapter 5:
-Chapter 6:
-Chapter 7:
-Chapter 8:
-Chapter 9:
-Chapter 10:
-Chapter 11:
-Chapter 12:
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