Evil (rewritten)

Because of the improvement of my English, I want to rewrite my first story "Evil".
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Description:
Searching for a new life, so I am here. However, an unpredictable attack from monsters gives me another hit. I just want a peaceful life... Why is it so hard? Now my aim is to survive on this ship. However, I must pay attention to every corner on the ship... Who knows what kind of creatures are waiting for you there.
During the search for supplies and the way out of here, I meet some people. Some are interesting ones. It seems that they have also hidden something behind them.
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Disclaimer:
- The characters are all my own OC's (if there are some similarities to other authors, it is a coincidence!).
- The story is my imagination (again if there are some similarities, it is a coincidence!)
- I will mention if I use something from other authors, games, films, etc.