Losing My Sun

Aluca was a lonely teenager who hated the world. Aluca was never loved, despite living in many homes. Aluca thought it didn't show, but Nicolai saw right through his eyes, that he too had been hurt. Nicolai completely changed Aluca's life surrounding him friends and family that loved Aluca for him no matter what had happened in the past. Waiting with open arms, his friends became his family, slowly changing Aluca into a better. Nicolai showed Aluca love for the first time. Nicolai became Aluca's sun.

"You said I would never have to face the world alone ever again. You said you'd be there for my lows just like my highs, so where are you! I called you my sun, but I guess that was stupid of me, right, Nico."
" I'm sorry, Luca."
"I'll never rely on you for happiness ever again, Nico. That was a mistake on my part."
"I'm sorry, my sunflower."

I'm a first time writer so forgive the grammar and the micro chapters in the beginning. It gets better I promise. I'm open to suggestions and look forward to criticism, but please be witty with it.
Story contains kissing and the fwop fwop, but they will be adults then NOT minors.
WORK IN PROGRESS: [23,922 words, 16 chapters atm]
Start: December 26, 2021