The legendary legend of the legendary legends who were legendary

Welllllll, I wrote that beginning thingy of a story, and just kinda wanted to dump that unedited shit here, pls, if you have time to read around 5900 words, and give a lil review, then please do so (like it's really not edited at all, there may be some German words in parentheses, cuz I forgot the english word for it, and had to edit it in later or some shit). But yeah, feel free to read, or just ignore that.

Btw, the plot line: rays getting reincarnated (and Yes I already know that I have to edit the very first pages like hell), and kinda lives through the shittyness of actual reincarnation and all that, like this part is really just about his first days there

So yeah, thx for being here:)