NITYA - THE ETERNAL ONE (Editing)
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  • Reads 44,227
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  • Parts 96
  • Time 15h 30m
Complete, First published Dec 28, 2021
Mature
2 new parts
(Nitya was lying on the floor on her stomach)

(All the men present there except family members were laughing and of course making fun of her, while she was lying down)

Dushashan : ye lijiye jyest, aapki dasi aapke samne prastut hai 

Nitya : mei kisiki dasi nhi hu!!

(Nitya's voice was heard, it was cold and dark, hearing this, everyone paused their laughing session and looked at her keenly)

(She stood up from her place and glanced at everyone who was looking at her with lustful eyes, her hair was messed up, saree was disheveled revealing some parts of the body, she was having wounds everywhere, moreover, all the sight of unknown men made her hella uncomfortable)

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(Kunti took a deep breath)

Kunti : tumhara jyest aur koi nhi, Karn hai!!!

(Everyone gasped listening this, including Karn)

(All looked at Kunti and Karn with wide eyes, no one was able to believe this fresh news)

(Infact, Karn too didn't have any idea of this)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

This is a fanfiction starring another Sister of The Great Pandavas and Kauravas, Daughter of Madri and Pandu.

She is a blessing from Lord Mahadev and Devi Parvati.

Everyone knows about the Great Mahabharat, but I have added a twist by introducing a younger sister of Pandavas and Kauravas (Nitya) she is most loving, caring and supportive towards her Pandava brothers, she cannot tolerate insults for her family members, rather it be anyone, on the contrary Duryodhan too loves her as he expects no harm from her, but Nitya hates Kauravas as they always try Pandavas to get out of the way of Hastinapur 
 and it's Throne.

So, let's deep down more in the story and see The Great Mahabharata through the eyes of Nitya.

This whole story is full of my imagination, it has nothing to do with the real Mahabharat.

Started on : 24th November, 2023
Ended on : 22nd January, 2025
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