A Place For Burned Souls

I was thinking about writing a book, but first I would like to hear some opinions. So here's the first 3 chapters of it.

In 2079, we finally achieved magic. The governs started trying to incorporate it on the daily life of the population. There were glorious days. But human nature wants always the same: more. And that came with a huge consequence.
Now, there's no countries anymore, no cities, no governments. Just a destroyed world and a bunch of people trying to survive to it. And there's the Soul Eaters. Dark and merciless creatures made of shadows and curses, living in the darkness of the night and eating the souls of everyone that gets on their way. Born because of the amount of magic released on the world.

Catelyn is one of the few survivors of this world. Only 16, she thrives because of her three simple rules:

- don't trust anyone
- be always on the sunshine
- don't eat yourself with guilt

But there's something else that helped her, and that no one knows about: the dangerous power to manipulate fire.

Then Lyn finds Matteo, a young man looking for a safe place to start a new life.
With him, she will discover a huge change in the way she thought this new world was like.