Fitoor
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  • Reads 2,764
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  • Parts 3
  • Time 45m
Ongoing, First published Jan 01, 2022
~Asad X Adah~

❝ you smiled, i fell in love ❞

~~

He was irritated. For the way, she chided him everytime. But what frustrated him more was the way she attracted him in every single way. He was frustrated that she is so beautiful, inside out that he irritated her for no reason but just to hear her dramatic voice which was sweet as fück--

A mongoose, A monkey, A cunning wolf, An annoying person he was, in her eyes. A hot n' handsome human species too. But nahh!!! She ain't saying that. But nonetheless he is a good person and she knows.

But this stays the way it is until he had finally had it.

~~

"Jab bhi aankhein kholta hun na" his eyes held a passion. A strong one.

"toh tumhari yeh hassi, yeh smile, yeh badi badi khubsurat si aankhein, yeh gusse se laal chehra.. sab kuch saamne aa jata hai !!!!!! SAB KUCH!!" 

He frustratingly confessed staring straight in my eyes. His face sweaty, jaw ticking and teeth grinding made me pin myself more against the wall. I stared him back with utter shock. 

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An Indian Muslim Story!

• Language: Hinglish (Hindi + English)
• Mature Content: Can't say, would inform if included.

I promise to not disappoint anyone of you. I have always felt this as a beautiful story with littles ignites in it. I would be glad if you give "Fitoor" a chance. 

Thank you! 🌎💎

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