The Ruins

The Ruins

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This is my first attempt to write a cosmic horror short story. Since it's a work in progress, I do not have a definitive title and/or description yet. Please feel free to comment and feedback, I am grateful for all the advice I can get to improve my writing. Enjoy
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My friend at school told me he was writing a book called this but didn't know what it was going to be about, so I said "why don't we both write a version of it and then compare them to see what we each did differently," so this is it! This story is about a man called max who dies in an accident and finds himself on a giant spaceship. Where a select few go to look eternally for the gem of thunder, and nobody has obtained it yet. This book is getting a rewrite! I am not satisfied with how it turned out, and it needs reworking for me to finish off the storyline.

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