The Bright Colours of Misery [COMPLETED]

This is the story of a young girl named Heidi Seide, who grew up in Germany during the Second World War, told by her 'soul adviser' (Guardian angel). She always lived in the shadow of her twin sister and older siblings, which led her to believe she was simply never good enough, and this belief only grew stronger as a stupid little accident led to her parents finding out about her worsening eyesight.

(Before starting to read this, please keep in mind that this is the very first almost unedited draft of the story.
It is most likely packed with historical inaccuracies and also inaccurate German sayings/words...etc.
If you ever notice I wrote something that is wrong or insensitive, please tell me and I will fix it right away, I don't want people to get my intention with this book wrong (: all right that's it, Enjoy!)

(PS: Just so you all know, English is not my first language, but I enjoy writing in English. So if you see any mistakes while reading please tell me! It would help a lot. :) also, this little project is heavily inspired by the book thief, so if you enjoyed that book, this is made for you, I'm writing it specifically for you guys.)