Welcome to the Charkh Tank

I wrote this for an English final but I am actually proud of what I wrote....also putting this up to get back at someone saying I can't write but anywho.

It's about these group of guys who are an Army Machine Gunner platoon who are engaged with Taliban forces at C.O.P Charkh (hence the name) and its based off this video I found on YouTube so I tried to get the names of the soldiers as accurate as possible from what I heard. I thought of doing it about some soldiers because the book we were reading prior was The Things They Carried so ye enjoy. :D