Trouble In Adventure

Mirelle and his family have just moved to a small town in the country of Nowidise, to escape the harsh beliefs of their own people. During his first day of school, he meets kind-hearted Ysra, and their friend Lijya. Ysra's nice enough, it's Lijya and her- often illegal- escapades he has to watch out for.
Warning- minor swearing, though I try to limit it where I can.

To the only two people most likely to be reading this: I felt inspired. I thought, 'why not?'. I hope someone maybe likes it? Don't expect it to be good or anything though.
To any and all potential readers I am completely open to constructive criticism, but I'm sensitive, so please be nice. Or, better yet, always be nice! (No offensive comments, jokes, etc. If you have any problems with that, can you please leave now. Thank you for understanding.)

*Note this is a fantasy world. I do not agree with every belief in this story, I am purely trying to make a realistic world.
I made it up, and I'm sure anyone who reads this will not know how to pronounce anything. It's okay; I have trouble pronouncing a lot of it, and I made it up. Since I expect very few people to be reading this, simply ask me and after roughly 5 minutes of freaking out, I will attempt to answer in a way that makes sense. If I get more people reading this than I expected, then I will probably put up a pronunciation guide.