(name still in progress)

This is about a guy named Owen and his family problems

Tw/stuff that's talked about in the story
Alcohol drinking
(Most likely more things I'll add but I'm not that far yet to think about the story)

English is not my first language and I'm a beginner writer i do take criticism on if i spelled something wrong and how i can fix it or if there's something i should change to make the story line easier to understand but i don't take criticism where you're straight up rude for no reason, so please if you're going to give me criticism don't start calling me names thank you:)