Hi guys! This is my first story ever on here, so I'd love to hear your constructive criticism!
Warning: This is unedited so please tell me if anything needs to be fixed.
Enjoy!
All Rights Reserved
Join the largest storytelling communityGet personalized story recommendations, save your favourites to your library, and comment and vote to grow your community.
Hiii so this is my first story and I hope you will like it.
English isn't my first language so if I mess something up tell me.
I hope you like this story😊