Hi guys! This is my first story ever on here, so I'd love to hear your constructive criticism!
Warning: This is unedited so please tell me if anything needs to be fixed.
Enjoy!
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Hi guys! This is my first story ever on here, so I'd love to hear your constructive criticism!
Warning: This is unedited so please tell me if anything needs to be fixed.
Enjoy!