Beginnings?
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Last published Mon, Jan 5, 2015
So I need to get some initial impressions on the work I've done so far. This is a new story, which is to say original content, not a fan fiction, nor is it based in someone else's universe. Urban Fantasy, Post-war, dystopian world. Warning: It's intended for Young and Full Adults. Language is just the beginning. Otherwise? Enjoy, and tell me what you think, what you think is going to happen, what you think SHOULD happen.
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