a fan's frustration
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It is not a fanfiction but my personal feedback , because I have no account in twitter or insta to give a feedback .this would be a total analysis of the show called pandya store. This would Contain negative feedback. This is not to hurt any fans or fanclub ,it's just a me trying to figure out the problem with this show ,pandya store.Do comment,I like to know what you feels about this feedback.
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