Messed up! The Great Beginning
BluePhoenix7185
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  • Parts 120
  • Time 6h 44m
BluePhoenix7185
Complete, First published Jan 29, 2022
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Patricia Crossed out is a teenage girl who woke up from the dead and started a new life on the planet Legalola in the Truelanian Empire. She was adopted by the greatest hero of the Empire, Truelania herself and thought this was her happy ending. However, after 2 years, living happily with her mother, an incident had happened where she had lost her mother. Or so she thought.

(Be aware that there are sensitive and brutal topics mentioned here! This is why it's marked as adult content.)

The chapters are PAGES! Literal PAGES with 500 to 900 words. 

I originally made this story in my head, but a friend insisted that I write it here for them to read! You can read it as well if you want, but this is my first time ever writing a book, so don't expect much. (Could be cringe in other words) I will not be rewriting old chapters to make them better because I want to be able to see my improvement over time :)
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{This is not a fanfiction ^^;} [Also, ⚠️TRIGGER WARNING⚠️] Raven is a 15 year old girl with some family issues. Well, more like issues in general. She just can't seem to catch a breather from her parents' fighting and yelling and then involve her, which was annoying. She wanted to get out of there, but living on her own was impossible considering her age, so she moves to her favourite family member, her uncle: Moji. Though he lived in a house with 17, 20, 22, 23 and 27 year olds, him being 27 as well, she was welcomed. He lived in another city, not too far though, but Raven didn't forget about her other life that nobody should get involved with. Her uncle knew about it...but he didn't say anything. Will she manage to get away unscathed and live her life secretly, or will the others interfere? Let's hope not...

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