Tears Will Fall {DreamSMP Short Story}

Hey guys, so this is just a idea that I want your guys' opinions on. I'm thinking of putting this on AO3, but I really want to know what you guys think of it.

This is mainly based on some events of Wilbur's book on AO3, "The Wilbur Van".
Most events have been changed, so please be mindful of this.

Warning: Violence and major character death