The King and The Cloud
dmiadovnik
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  • Reads 18
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  • Parts 8
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dmiadovnik
Complete, First published Jan 31, 2022
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In the ancient, mystical city of Havdalah, the young prince, Baheer, had reached his coming of age.  After years of training and practice, Baheer would sing from the scrolls of the holy Torah on his bar mitzvah.   

Destiny, however, had greater plans for Baheer than that of any ordinary prince.  On this special day, the angel Mimouna visited the grand synagogue and blessed the child, ensuring that he would grow to become a glorious king with the protection of heaven surrounding him. 

Growing to manhood, Baheer rose to become the ruler of Havdalah, with fate unfolding just as the angel intended.  Though, not everyone in the land held King Baheer in esteem. The evil witch Soofa was an enemy of Havdalah. She harboured an especially deep, burning hatred towards the miraculous king and his glorious reign.  

During the festivities for the holiday of Purim, Soofa infiltrates the palace and, defying the angelic blessing, inflicts a curse over Baheer. The curse takes the form of a dark cloud over his head.  The cloud's influence throws the king into a dire depression, feeding off of his negative feelings.   

The cloud then grows to a size that eclipses the sun and swallows the sky, leaving Havdalah in an endless night.  To save his city, his family, and his soul from shadows and sadness, King Baheer must journey into the harsh and perilous desert to find the only one who can lift the witch's spell:  Mimouna.  Otherwise, all will be forever lost in darkness.
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