The Mystery of Patrick Montaine
AmandaC812
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AmandaC812
Ongoing, First published Feb 02, 2022
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An unnamed 21 year old gets his kicks by forcing himself upon strange women and then killing them, making him a serial killer. While being chased by the feds, he runs into his birth mother who gives him a place to stay only to find out after he kidnaps her that he murdered her children, her lover and his lover all to try to earn her love. The CIA also become involved thanks to his birth father and things become hairy.

This was inspired by the TV Show Criminal Minds. I was binge watching the show while working the night shift and started writing. I hope you enjoy!
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MARACLEA••• (Nigel Colbie x reader)

6 parts Complete Mature

raised in a church her entire life, y/n yearned for adventure outside of stupid acts for a simple rush of adrenaline. she wanted to run from cops, steal, drink, party, and have sex. she wanted a life worth living, and that was granted once Nigel came and ruined her and her brother's lives. it was worth it. she wanted to be his, and he wanted her to be his Maraclea. (IK HE IS A PSYCHO MURDERER, BUT OML I LOVE TOM STURRIDGE AND NIGEL IS SO FINE I COULD RANT FOR DAYS!) -ALSO THERE IS LITERALLY 1 SINGULAR STORY ON THIS SEXY MURDER FREAK SMUT WARNING 18+ (IK Y'ALL 14 YR OLDS OUT THERE IDC IF U READ😭) ANGST VIOLENCE GORE ETC

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