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Story about how a boy loses everything.

PLEASE DONT READ IF ITS TO DEPRESSING

I did fix the ending so it isn't so desperately sad.

I found a writing prompt I loved...it turned out much more depressing than expected. It needs SERIOUS revision because I wrote it in one sitting. It has hardly any plot or good story line. But if by chance you would like to see it, here is my depressing and rough draft work.