The Last Great Time War: part II

Realizing that he cannot run from the War any longer, the Doctor has rejected his name to become a warrior. He must take a stand and fight to save the universe from the conflict and horrors engulfing it. Fighting Daleks is now in his nature. But seeing the Time Lords increasing brutality, selfishness, and callous disregard for other forms of life, he knows he has another serious problem. Not to mention Rassilon's true dark history. Can he save his own people from the darkness growing inside them?

Intended to do the Time War justice to what it was described and implied to be, which "The Day of the Doctor" and "Engines of War" fell short of.
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There is a part 3.