One Special Surprise.

Hi guys! I'm new on Wattpad right now. This is the very first short story I wrote (apart from the ones when I was, like, five) and I'd appreciate it if y'all just read it and left a few suggestions. I admit it's not that good, maybe even a cliche, but I just want your opinions. Tell me how I can improve my writing styles, etc. I really, really, really wanna be a novelist, so you can you help me make my dream come true?

Lauren wants to give her best friend her dream gift for her birthday, but with her, no one can be sure she will until she does. Will she be true to her word, or will she end up making another impulsive decision?