WAS I BORN IN THE WRONG WAY?

This is a short story which aims on the life of a Gay man who suffers alot because of his sexuality in this homophobhic society.

It's a first story I've ever written in my life so it may not reach to your expectations but people learn when they try right?
All the positive criticisms are welcome.
English isn't my first language so there could be many errors, help me spot them so I can know my mistakes but I hope you'll like my try❤

PS: It is my original creation so please refrain in using it in any form. Your understanding is appreciated!

And my lovelieesssss do comment and press the star button to vote this piece, even if it's a new one I need motivaaaaattiooon hehehe❤❤❤