Trapped
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Last published Fri, Jan 9, 2015
Damien wakes up to find himself trapped in a room, he can't remember how he got here or where he last was. He starts looking around for answers.
This is my first story, I've never done one before, hope you find it good. I'd like some feedback to know what I can do to improve, thanks.
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