the rich kid and the loner remake (Higher first draft)
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Okay so this is my first attempt at remaking my other (older) story 'the rich kid and the loner'. I wrote a bit of it but I couldn't figure out where the story wanted to go and what to do with the characters etc. so I've abandoned it. I'm reuploading it now as a first draft to what ended up becoming 'Higher', the story I actually wanna write. This first draft follows the original much more closely then 'Higher' does, so I thought I'd ljust leave it here. And also because I think this is the remake that 'the rich kid and the loner' readers wanted. Sorry, but I can't make this story work without changing things around.
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