What Others Don't See - Rewrite
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Last published Sat, May 14, 2022
Naruto lives life for it's harsh reality immediately after birth. He doesn't get the privilege of being an ignorant child. Not that he's treated as one. Instead his own family treats him as though he's a monster. He meets Kurama at the ripe age of five, and with his help becomes a polished ninja capable of protecting himself. At least physically, his mental health still falter's where only his true friends can help him.
As the Title says this is just a rewrite of my previous work. This version is a lot better and I recommend reading this instead. the plot will take a different and better direction then it did before as well. the characters will feel a lot more real with their emotions and this will have a lot more angst than it's counterpart.
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